Snowpiercer An alternate (much Shorter Version) Where the Hero gets “shortened”
With the advice of Gilliam our hero Curtis (Chris Evans) has been planning to take the train.
His side kick is Edgar. (Jamie Bell) “Is everything ready?” asks Curtis. “Yes, the giant pipe
has been assembled and everyone is ready,” replies Edgar. “Are we sure that
bullets have gone extinct?” asks Gilliam. “Yes,” replies Curtis, “that’s why the
Minister told the guards their guns were useless when she came to pick up the
children.” “I just wish that Andrew hadn’t resisted.” Says Edgar. “Loosing his
arm to the cold outside the train was the standard response.” adds Gilliam “Even
if it is barbaric.”
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Everyone is in place to rush the door to the forward part of the train the next
time the guards bring the ration cards. But when the doors open instead of the
food cart a pair of gas cannisters are thrown into the rear compartment. The
Minister in her bright white uniform enters wearing a gad mask. “Bullets might
be extinct but knockout gas isn’t.”
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When the crown awakens there has been a change in the compartment. A new set of
bars with a locked door has been erected separating the first ten feet of the
compartment from the rear. The Minister, The Conductor, and a dozen guards stand
there. Curtis and Edgar are gaged and hogtied naked at their feet. “Ah, Good,
everyone is awake. We can begin now.” States The Minister while her right hand
continually makes her usual strange repetitive motion. “Mr. Wilford spared your
lives when the world froze. There is only life on the Train. The Engine protects
and provides for us all. Yet, you keep rebelling against the good that he has
done and risk all that is left of humanity. We have been merciful in the past.
But no more.” Turning to Curtis she says, “We will make an example of you to
stop future rebellions cold.” The guards grab Curtis and drag him towards the
small portal to the outside that they had used earlier to freeze Andrew’s arm.
Instead of sticking Curtis’s arm out, they thrust his heroic size cock and balls
into the freezing cold outside. “Conductor, the time?” The Conductor replies,
“Soft tissue so just two minutes.” “Then we will announce the rest of the
sentence while we are waiting. You, Curtis, after this is finished will be taken
to the first-class section of the train. You will be dosed on Kronole for the
rest of your time on the train. There you will serve the basest desires of your
betters.” Turning to Edgar she adds, “for abetting his rebellion you will serve
a similar fate. However, you will serve in the crew section.” “Time.” Chimes in
the Conductor. The guards pull Curtis form the tiny porthole. His total package
has been frozen solid form exposure. They drag his shivering body over to an
anvil and make him kneel on it with a leg on each side and his cold whitened
genitals on the top surface. With a grin off the guards takes a sledge hammer
and shatters his manhood into a million shards. Curtis goes into shock form cold
and loss. Two minutes later Edgar shares his fate.
